I really want a story for Vincent like I have for Chiaki but I have dilemma. I don't know which know age to make him. 19 or 30? I have two ideas.

1. 19 years old: Vincent is a Freshman in college taking a preternatural major.( It works in his world where supernatural beings could be next door neighbors.) A few weeks into his college life, he's recruited into a fraternity for therianthropy like himself. He has a desperate need for friends but could that be possible when he lost trust in humanity in general? He was practically treated like shit by his own uncle, friends, a boyfriend, and girlfriends. Even his parents said that he would account to nothing.( That was because of his juvenile delinquency. He was arrested for almost killing a boy and arson.) He meets eight young men: Terrence Baek , Leonel Xu, Niklas Blake, Sebastian Herrera, Iskander Sahadi, Ruben Vanderheiden, Ezekiel Halkias, and Noah Williams. He has to become friends with all of them despite of his tendency to push people away.


3. 30 years old : Vincent works as a preternatural investigator along with his 2nd brother,Isaiah. Vincent is in a stormy marriage with a businesswoman. They appear like a happy and loving couple in the company of others especially to their triplets. Vincent's wife is abusive towards him. He replies with a snarky and spiteful comments to protect his already low self-esteem deeply rooted from childhood and adolescence. He hoped that someone would kill her. Ironically, she was eventually found dead in her office. He would have rejoiced if he wasn't a prime suspect. Vincent did hate her guts and wished that she was dead. His total lack of grief just made the case hot. Vincent is set free when the DNA left at the crime scene wasn't human. Now it's up to him to solve his wife's murder.




Which one sounds better? The latter or the previous?


I'm liking the second,myself. I'm such a drama whore. xD